Thorain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zombie's Prologue]

Ouch,

Your grammar is terrible to say the least. In order to enthrall people about a story with very unprofessionally done drawings you need to understand the language you're using. The storyline isn't too terrible, but I hope it isn't mostly text based like this preview was. If you'd like be to go over your script before you place it in a flash then give me a pm with it.

[Planetoid - Chapter 1]

Beautifully done

Your work is very artistic and fits Perfectly to the music. It's like I feel bad that I even have to give this thing a five. Shouldn't you just get to upload your stuff without it even being considered for deletion?

Fate responds:

I'm glad you think it suits the music.
that's always the hardest part for me.
Finding the right song.
And I don't mind the judgement process, though it drives me crazy when it's got one vote left, and nobody watches it. :P

[Melbourne shuffle stick]

Wow,

The intro was kinda noobish, but the flash was actually pretty good when it got into it. Could've gone a little something with the background characters, but the blurring was a nice touch. For a second animation I have to say this is great work.

Tuggieman responds:

the intro was supposed to resemble the youtube video: Melbourne Shuffle Compilation 3. thats why I put that there.

And yes, the background was not supposed to be seen directly.

thank you

[FlashBack John]

There's only one way to review that...

Lol, wtf? 10.

[Professor Layton pt. 5]

This movie

Is what I joined newgrounds for six years ago. Thank you.

Skaijo responds:

Wow! Very touching comment. I sincerely appreciate the love. :3

[-Empty-]

Could you screw it up any more?

When you add a coma that means you're adding a conjunction such as: and, but, or or. Your beginning statement is a regular sentence that does not need the help of comas. You did it to sound smart and I hate you for it because you're dumb. Very dumb. "When all is lost an angel will rise AND she will be your savior." Btw, I voted 1. Have a nice day.

Oreogazmic responds:

Well if wanted to sound smart, i'd join a math or language club or something and talk about boring stuff and then make an educational video about my experience. That sounds like a good idea actually, maybe ill do that for my next one!

Thanks for the review!!

[the sleepover]

This movie

is crap. The only reason it's still up is because it's not letting me vote on it while logged in.

williamreinsch responds:

yeah, because your one vote would have brought it down from 2.38 to 0.05

[RepublicaSocialistaMundia]

Simply Amazing

Just blew my mind... stunning.

Kenzu responds:

Thank you! That's exactly the emotion I wanted to evoke!

[Farewell to You]

it was interesting..

not many people do flashes like this.. and when chicks get shot not many leave a dead chick with her panties exposed.. well i hope that works out for you. it was good it just needed a little more sound and maybe a tad better graphics on some parts but other than that it is good.

S-M-films responds:

Thanks i was aiming for the little twisted feeling in there glad u thought it was interesting :)

[Lost Illusion]

I h8 u.. with all my body and mind and spirit

IT CANT END THERE!! IT MUST KEEP GOING!!
he must keep going keep trying.. i h8 u soo much...
that was tooo short with no good end!!...
that has happened to me i need to know there
is a good ending i need to know it can happen...